I had my creative writing class again this evening. We broke into small groups for critiques of flash fiction.
Despite having one fewer member in our group this week, we finished at least half an hour later than some of the other groups. It was a fun little session. The stories showed good promise, and I hope my suggestions were helpful. I don’t think I pull any punches while providing my criticism. I certainly don’t start off every critique with another version of “I really liked this story”. Where there are problems, either in plot progression, character development, description or dialogue, I point it out, usually with a suggestion as to how to do things better.
My story somehow got selected to be last for review yet again. Thankfully, in the smaller sessions, we’re not working under the same time restraints. I find it disappointing though, to receive minimal feedback, most of which dealt with things I did well. While I’m pleased that people enjoyed it, as a workshop draft, it’s not at a state where I’m particularly happy with it. In fact, I think my story has major issues in plot, pacing, characterization, and point of view. Some characters were certainly not used as well as they could have been.
A few parts of this were mentioned, but nothing specific was cited as being a point for improvement. Maybe my expectations for this course were too high? Ah well. I know where I want this story to go. I’ll revise it over the weekend. I also want to revise one of my stories this weekend so I can submit it for the Tesseracts 14 anthology. It’s a dark little Canadian steampunk story. Hopefully it will interest John Robert Colombo and Brett Alexander Savory.